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This has come up before. I don't know of any "Hey Baby"/The Cry of Love Tour/1970-period photos in the public domain, so they could only be added under a claim of being "irreplaceable historically significant"; justifying the right photo(s) would be difficult. —Ojorojo (talk) 17:57, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
Actually, this is getting a bit frustrating. There are many amateur photos of Hendrix out there[1] that don't show copyright marks. I'm tempted to upload some that I've never seen on albums, books, films, etc. and see what happens. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"In the following months at the Record Plant in New York City, Hendrix attempted more recordings of the song." → "In the months following on from recording at TTG studios, Hendrix attempted more recordings of the song at the Record Plant in New York City." to specify
"used a minor-key chord progression reminiscent" is this of his version of the song? If so, change WikiLink to "All Along the Watchtower"
Both actually, but linked Hendrix's. —Ojorojo (talk) 22:15, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"Hendrix, with drummer Buddy Miles and percussionist Juma Sultan, jammed on some new tunes at the Record Plant" → "Hendrix jammed on some new tunes at the Record Plant with drummer Buddy Miles and percussionist Juma Sultan"
"the second posthumous album produced" → "Hendrix's second posthumous album, produced"
Actually a gray market live album produced by others was the second (or third?). I don't want to give these too much attention. —Ojorojo (talk) 17:57, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"For the released version" → "Of the released version"
After re-reading, I think this is unnecessary, so left it out. —Ojorojo (talk) 17:57, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"and the following month in the UK; it performed..." → "and the following month in the UK, with "Hey Baby (New Rising Sun) being released as the eighth track on the album." as the chart positions of the album aren't very notable here while the position of the track on the album is. Use AllMusic as a source for the position if you don't have one in the already included refs.
Track numbers only came into use with CDs. For LPs, only the opening and closing songs for each side may have been noted (not by number). —Ojorojo (talk) 17:57, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
Added to the 2014 CD reissue sentence. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"was included on the 1997 release, First Rays of the New Rising Sun" → "was included on the 1997 compilation album First Rays of the New Rising Sun" as you need to let readers know it's a compilation
"Two earlier demo versions..." write about these in prose as it's only two
Done and added reviews so it isn't so listy. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
"songs (the other being "Freedom") that" → "tracks alongside "Freedom" that"
The songs were still being recorded and not yet consigned to tracks – a song is a musical composition; a track is how it appears. —Ojorojo (talk) 22:15, 26 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
I'm assuming that's the quotes and lyrics. Does it show which? —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
Make sure to archive all of these with the fix dead links tool
Isn't there a bot that does this? There are only five links: two to jimihendrix.com, two to AllMusic, and one to rollingstone.com. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
On hold for a week until all of the issues are addressed, merry Christmas too! --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:47, 25 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Kyle Peake: I've addressed your comments... and a happy almost New Year! —Ojorojo (talk) 18:15, 27 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
Ojorojo Great work, just respond to my final query. --Kyle Peake (talk) 19:23, 28 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Kyle Peake: OK, done. Thanks for using the bot & such a thorough review. I know zip about hip hop, but reviewed Send It Up. Let me know if a similar-type review would be helpful. —Ojorojo (talk) 20:00, 28 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Ojorojo: not hip hop but do you think you could do Fortune? ✓Pass on this anyway. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:54, 29 December 2019 (UTC)Reply