Talk:Herr Gott, dich loben alle wir, BWV 130/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Gerda Arendt (talk · contribs) 22:04, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 07:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Starting! 750h+ 07:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

prose

Feel free to refuse my suggestions with justification. Will do some copyediting (which you're free to revert)

lead

• soloists and choir, three trumpets, timpani, flauto ==> "soloists and choir, with three trumpets, timpani, flauto"

  The trummpets are actually the main contribution to the festivity. --GA

• A manuscript which was likely written ==> "A manuscript likely written"

  tried differently, - you could do it yourself --GA

• as No. 31 in second Anhang ==> "as No. 31 in the second Anhang"

history

• of chorale cantatas, begun on the ==> "of chorale cantatas, beginning on the"

  why? --GA

• as Elijah taken to heaven ==> "as Elijah is taken to heaven"

  tried differently --GA

• text, concluded by general ==> "text, concluding with general"

  taken

music

• annual cycle: "it is the most Capitalise "it"

  taken --GA

• by the throng of angels i'd change "throng" to "multitude" or something similar.

': no, it's a quote

• Gardiner, who conductd the "conducted" is spelt wrong.

  taken - arriving, will continue later --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:39, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

manuscripts and publication

• edition 130.1of Bach's work what's "130.1of" supposed to be?

  fixed, leftover --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:47, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

variant versions

Nothing wrong here.

recordings

Nothing wrong here.

sources and images

Sources and images are fine. Happy to pass the article as a WP:GA once my prose concerns are addressed. 750h+ 07:29, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

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