Suggestions edit

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  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?] ✔️ DONE
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout.[?] ✔️ DONE
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.) ➖ WORK IN PROGRESS
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.” ➖ WORK IN PROGRESS
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]WORK IN PROGRESS

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Berrely (talk) 14:02, 31 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

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