Talk:Hepatic hydrothorax/GA2
Latest comment: 15 hours ago by Aeschylus in topic GA Review
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Nominator: Aeschylus (talk · contribs) 18:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- It is much more common on the right side, with 85% of cases occurring on the right redundancy
- Link severe ascites on fist occurrence
- In cases that do not respond What does "cases" mean here?
- The prognosis is usually poor. Needs further explanation
- In some people, the main symptoms of people with cirrhosis are respiratory and related to the effusion. Unsourced
- The condition generally has no specific symptoms comma after symptoms
- The condition generally has no specific symptoms as it generally occurs Redundancy
- I notice the articles is underlinked. Please fix that
- less than 1 cm Add a cvt template
- I don't see anything on its causes
- For those with refractory hepatic hydrothorax Change those to patients
- In people with serious liver dysfunction, TIPS may cause liver failure, as it shunts blood away from the liver. Unsourced
- Please change for those to for patients throughout the article
- Sources are reliable
- File:Hepatic hydrothorax after treatment.png lacks an author
@Aeschylus: That's all from me. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 11:31, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds good! I will work on it promptly.
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11: Partly done: I changed to people, as we need to write for the layperson per MEDMOS
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13: Not done for now Doesn't this violate MEDMOS?
15: Done aeschylus (talk) 20:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Driveby comment.
Article on medical conditions should strive to use the most up-to-date appropriate sources, per WP:MEDDATE. There's a recent open access review at PMID 38505059 that perhaps could be used in this article. Esculenta (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Aeschylus: You might want to consider this. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 19:43, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- I am, my activity is on-and-off. I will do so rn. aeschylus (talk) 21:53, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Aeschylus: Let me know if you're done, because it seems like you aren't even addressing some of the issues I've raised. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 07:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Wolverine XI: AFAIK, I have addressed all of your concerns. However, I may have missed some. If I have, don't hesitate to let me know. aeschylus (talk) 19:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Aeschylus: Let me know if you're done, because it seems like you aren't even addressing some of the issues I've raised. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 07:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- Done. aeschylus (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC)