Talk:Henry Lytton/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Tim riley in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 16:17, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
Very happy to review this article.
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Lead section
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1.1 Early years
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1.2 Principal comedian on tour 1887 to 1897
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1.3 The Savoy: 1897 to 1903
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1.4 West End: 1903 to 1909
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1.5 Principal comedian: 1909 to 1934
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1.6 Last years
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2 Recordings, film and broadcasts
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3.1 Notes
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3.3 Sources
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On hold edit
I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 13 June to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 08:03, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for the above. It would be helpful if you could indicate which, if any, suggested points you consider are mandatory under GA criteria 1−6 and which are your personal stylistic preferences. Tim riley talk 10:01, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- I'll star the points that are imo not optional. Amitchell125 (talk) 10:58, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Stars added. I've not starred the wikilink suggestions, as I'm not sure if you have to add appropriate links according to GA criteria, but see MOS:BUILD. No-one has ever queried the idea of ignoring the link-adding advice in 150 reviews though, and the suggested links are worth including imo. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 11:14, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. It was chiefly your list of links that troubled me. I try to avoid WP:OVERLINK and many (not all) of your suggestions seemed to me just that. Some other points are excellent and I look forward to going through them over the next few days. Tim riley talk 13:52, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Stars added. I've not starred the wikilink suggestions, as I'm not sure if you have to add appropriate links according to GA criteria, but see MOS:BUILD. No-one has ever queried the idea of ignoring the link-adding advice in 150 reviews though, and the suggested links are worth including imo. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 11:14, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- I'll star the points that are imo not optional. Amitchell125 (talk) 10:58, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- All points addressed now, I think. Tim riley talk 09:42, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Tim riley and Ssilvers: Thanks for all the progress being made here, based on what is a slightly "replying we sing, as one individual" approach—the comments labelled with the small red cross are still to be addressed. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hi, User:Amitchell125. We each addressed the first one (the G&S link), but you haven't replied to my discussion of it, which I feel stongly about. I will leave the last three to you and Tim riley. -- Ssilvers (talk) 14:50, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Tim riley and Ssilvers: Thanks for all the progress being made here, based on what is a slightly "replying we sing, as one individual" approach—the comments labelled with the small red cross are still to be addressed. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- All points addressed now, I think. Tim riley talk 09:42, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Passing edit
Passing now, thanks to both for your work on the article. Amitchell125 (talk) 08:34, 9 June 2022 (UTC)