Talk:Helping Hand (Body of Proof)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 22:47, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Image: Unneeded image; also up for deletion  Done
• Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox -> How will this expand the readers knowledge? — M.Mario (T/C) 17:23, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
• Lede: The lede needs to summarize every section of article per WP:LEAD. Mainly, please summarize the "Reception" section, per WP:LEAD  Done
• Production: Remove "most known for directing television series such as Ugly Betty and, Boston Legal". That is off the main topic -> This is part of the DYK- so cannot delete it. — M.Mario (T/C) 17:23, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
• Production: best known for his role in Ugly Betty, Resurrection Blvd and more recently Desperate Housewives -> This is part of the DYK- so cannot delete it. — M.Mario (T/C) 17:23, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
• Production: Try to add television rating for television in the United States  Done
• Reception: Unlink the United Kingdom. Please link to Television in the United Kingdom -> Why? It is the UK television ratings! — M.Mario (T/C) 17:23, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
• References: Ref. 5 - Zap 2 It → Zap2it  Done
• References: Split into two columns  Done
• External links: Add all external links for the IMDb, TV.com, ABC.com, and the Wikia episode page -> Not needed; IMDb is an unreliable source, and the Wikia episode page is awful. — M.Mario (T/C) 17:23, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Good work. On hold. TBrandley 22:02, 30 June 2012 (UTC)