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At what temperature are Heat Shock Proteins activated in humans? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.226.72.29 (talk) 22:07, 18 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

Explanation of changes edit

For my molecular genetics class, I improved this article and made a significant number of changes to more clearly explain heat shock on a molecular basis.Imossiah2016 (talk) 03:43, 26 November 2018 (UTC)imossiah2016Reply

@Imossiah2016: Thanks for your changes - they look good. Can I suggest that you try to explain the process as simply as possible in the first sentence though (WP:BEGIN)? Our articles should be understandable by relatively lay people and negative proteomic effects caused by stressors such as augmented temperatures is not particularly accessible. Thanks SmartSE (talk) 19:54, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Reply
Oh and would you be able to reupload File:Heat_Shock_Response_Pathway.tif as an .svg file instead of a .tiff? It's a much better file format for graphics (vector graphics vs. raster graphics). SmartSE (talk) 20:03, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Reply
Smartse, thank you for the tips to improve the article, I will work on that now.Imossiah2016 (talk) 22:02, 28 November 2018 (UTC)imossiah2016Reply
Smartse, I don't want to seem like I'm ignoring your advice but I tried to upload an svg file instead of the tiff for the picture but it didn't work. The image is not showing up, it's just a blank white space. I know the image is small but when it's clicked to be enlarged I think it looks clear so I will keep the image. Sorry for this. Imossiah2016 (talk) 23:22, 29 November 2018 (UTC)imossiah2016Reply
@Imossiah2016: No problem. It looks as if the file has just got the raster inside the vector file rather than writing the vectors directly. In Inkscape it's super easy to export svg but don't worry about it. SmartSE (talk) 23:57, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Reply