Talk:Heartland Christian Academy, Missouri

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Zfish118 in topic Assertion of Notability

Assertion of Notability

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  1. 1 It includes an secondary school.
  2. 2 Major government actions were taken against it.
  3. 3 A court made a major decision against the government.

Thus appropriate to include as an article in Wikipedia. --Zfish118talk 06:36, 8 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Neutrality Issues

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The article has been significantly expanded. While the additional sources are welcome, there are many issues of tone and organization.

The founding section doesn't read neutrally, albeit unneutrally in the school's favor. Terms like "welcomes" whole families editorialize.

The coverage of the abuse allegation details seems undo, as the allegations were not held up in court. The timeline of allegations and enforcement actions is unclear.

A paragraph is dedicated to the school's response to an incident where 11 students were removed, but no response to the 115 removed. For the manure incident, it is unclear what the students were forced to do. The commentary about the school's responses implies the school is more concerned about its image, which is editorializing. All criticism must be directly cited, not made or implied in Wikipedia's voice.

The further activism section implies the school "negotiated" in bad faith, by turning around and suing, which is more editorializing. The roll of the school in the purported negotiations is not clear, nor what the school hoped to achieve in its negotiations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zfish118 (talkcontribs)