Talk:Heart Attack (Noizy song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I am reunited with you for this review! --K. Peake 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Only keep dance and hip hop in the infobox, per the others only being sourced as elements
• "Musically, it is an" → "It is an"
• "Its lyrics explore a" → "The lyrics explore a"
• "and peaked at" → "while peaking at"

Background and composition

• "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "Heart Attack" is an"
• Where is the dance genre sourced?

Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

• "to have his significant other" → the source mentions "all to himself", so reword to add something similar

Reception

• "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
• songtexte.de should not be italicised
• hiphop.de should not be italicised
• "deemed it an" → "deemed the song an"
• laut.de should not be italicised
• The laut.de ref appears to source animates instead of motivates and the calm down part says "Only Loredana manages to slow him down", per my translator
• "including number three in" → "reaching number three in"
• [13][14][15] should be ordered to correspond with the countries listed

Music video

• Img looks good!
• "before a petrol station" are you sure this is appropriate terminology?

Do you have a suggestion? Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

• "in the city of Durrës, Albania, and along" → "in Durrës and along"

Charts

• Good

Release history

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks incredible at 4.8%!!!!
• Fix citations 1, 2 and 4 for ref 1 since the titles are different from what you have wrote them as here
• What exactly makes ref 4 a reliable source?

Replaced by a new source. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

• WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 17

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went reasonably quick! --K. Peake 09:09, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Hello Kyle Peake hope you're having a good summer. I've responded to all of the issues with few comments from my side. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:08, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

• Iaof2017 ✓ Pass now and for the gas station part, I used next to instead. --K. Peake 06:31, 26 July 2022 (UTC)