Talk:Healthcare in Senegal/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Piotrus in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Piotrus (talk · contribs) 09:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    It is recommended per WP:LEAD that the lead should summarize the article rather then offer unique information. This lead, however, instead of summarizing the article, does just that - for example the 54% figure used there is not mentioned elsewhere; this continues for most other claims in lead (such as the number of hospitals). 2) My second concern is too few blue links (WP:BTW) and imprecise terms; for example section"Organization of the health care system" mentions "minister’s office" - but we are not told which ministry is it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC).Reply
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Before I devote time to this review, seeing as it is for a student assignment with the principal author and nom (Heidimkahle (talk · contribs)) not active since mid April, I first want to verify thee's a party interesting in improving this before doing a throughout review. If not, I will have to quickfail it (which would be a shame, because the article seems like a really nice piece of work...). For now I've highlighted a few issues. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:16, 13 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Failed, due to no interest from the nominator. Another student-fueled waste of GA reviewer time. Sigh. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:50, 26 June 2013 (UTC)Reply