Talk:Hawizeh Marshes

Possible Copyright Plagiarism issues

I think this article might have some possible copyright or plagiarism issues. One example is

Management Plan for the Hawizeh Marsh Ramsar Site of Iraq, Second Draft Volume 1: Background, Vision, Principles and Annexes includes the following: The Government of Iraq has taken tangible steps toward this restoration. This includes major efforts to: reintroduce water in degraded parts of the southern marshes; cooperate in establishing an environmental monitoring and research program; set in motion planning for a National Park in the Central Marshes area of southern Iraq; and ensure the nation’s accession to the Ramsar Convention on Wetlands in October 2007 that included designation of Hawizeh Marsh as a Wetland of International Importance." is from http://natureiraq.biz/site/sites/default/files/Hawizeh%20Plan%202nd%20Draft%20Volume%201%20Dec%201%202008.pdf pvii.

Our article has this The Government of Iraq has taken tangible steps toward this restoration. This includes major efforts to: reintroduce water in degraded parts of the southern marshes; cooperate in establishing an environmental monitoring and research program; set in motion planning for a National Park in the Central Marshes area of southern Iraq; and to ensure the nation’s accession to the Ramsar Convention on Wetlands in October 2007 that included designation of Hawizeh Marsh as a Wetland of International Importance.

These are the same. The report here indicates much more is copied.

Best wishes (Msrasnw (talk) 15:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC))

This article has good information but is poorly written

someone please go back and edit the grammar on this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 146.115.75.143 (talk) 08:44, 12 June 2018 (UTC)