Talk:Hato Hasbún

Latest comment: 8 months ago by ThatApollo777 in topic Salvadoran Kingmaker section is heavily biased

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Life communicator section needs rewrite edit

The life communicator section is poorly written, its grammar is all over the place and i cant make head or tail of what it means I tried to fix it but its so bad I couldn't even tell what a sentence meant to convey and hence couldn't figure out how to replace it PLEASE REWRITE ThatApollo777 (talk) 17:05, 2 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Wartime section needs SIGNIFICANT edits edit

horrible grammar (I fixed some of it) and some sentences make no sense eg. After his death, also served as the strongman of the Castro, Ramiro Abreu, who is officially the Delegate of Cuba to Central America. This is a sentence I removed I have no idea what it meant Also a paragraph uses the phrase "our country" which clearly shouldn't be the case I dont know what country it mean so left it but PLEASE edit this section ThatApollo777 (talk) 17:11, 2 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Salvadoran Kingmaker section is heavily biased edit

Title says it all This whole page seems to be edited by a person with poor grammar and someone who was clearly biased towards Hato. ThatApollo777 (talk) 17:17, 2 September 2023 (UTC)Reply