Talk:Hasdrubal, son of Hanno/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:21, 28 August 2020 (UTC)

• Link city state in the lead?

Done.

• Probably needs a hatnote to Hasdrubal. None of the others are known as the "son of Hanno", but since there's so many with this name, the hatnote would probably be helpful.

You have gone technical here. I am but an ignorant content creator and do not always understand terminology.

• " the Romans turned to fight - Optional - I know we have different ideas about MOS EGG, so this one's optional. I'm just thinking maybe this whole phrase should be linked, although that's mostly because when I saw "turned to flight" linked, I assumed the link was to rout. I can see either side of this one, so I guess I'm just really thinking out loud here

Done.

• "and were joined by third general, Hamilcar," - by a third general

Done.

Through Battle of Tunis, I'll finish this off later. Hog Farm _Bacon 01:54, 28 August 2020 (UTC)

• "Henceforth the Carthaginian approach was purely defensive,[91] The war ended nine years later in 241 BC with a Roman victory" - I'm assuming that the comma is supposed to be a full stop.

Aging eyesight. Fixed.

• Refs in alphabetical order: you go Tipps, Walbank, Tipps, Walbank

The alphabet doesn't work like that where you live? Fixed.

• Google is misspelled in the Warmington ref

All Google links removed.

The references all look reliable, and the image licensing looks acceptable. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 18:45, 28 August 2020 (UTC)

Hi Hog Farm, swift work, thank you. Your comments all addressed above. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:42, 30 August 2020 (UTC)