Talk:Harry Bolick/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:14, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Added college boxers, boxing referees, pitchers, and Army cats
• Remove ref from lead. It's already in the article.
  • Done.
• "Southeastern A. A. U. tournament" link AAU perhaps
  • Done.
• Should Erskine baseball say 1946-47? The lake view one has a two year span and i thought he was only at lake view for one year
  • I changed the Lake View one.
• How do we know he coached football at Seneca and Ford?
  • Per this ref: "Jack Ross, former football player, will assume his duties as coach at Seneca High School next Monday, according to Superintendent J. N. Kellett. The 20-year-old ex-Marine succeeds Harry Bolick, former Presbyterian star, who has accepted the job as coach at Ford High School in Laurens."
• the infobox said he was all state in 1934 but I dont think i see that in the article?
  • Hmmm... you're right - it didn't say that in the article and I don't know how I found that initially, but I did a search and did find that to be correct so I added it in the prose.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:39, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:02, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
  • All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)