Talk:Harold B. Lee Library/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Eustress in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
- It looks odd in the references section to have external links pointing to the magazine's homepage. I'd just have them without the link; the URL provided to the page being cited should suffice.
- The Princeton Review shouldn't have italics
- "However, the Lewis building (where Maeser's office was located) burned down in 1884, the fire also destroyed the library collection." - the however is awkward her, and an "and" would make it read better after the comma I think.
- The history section has a few unsourced paragraphs.
- "By 1950, the collection had long since" - sounds awkward, some redundancy...
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- Hmm, on rereading you're probably right. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 09:16, 31 May 2008 (UTC)