Talk:Happy Ending (Schitt's Creek)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kncny11 (talk · contribs) 17:44, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey there! I'll be taking a look at this. Any section with a  Working tag means I haven't finished looking at it yet, but feel free to start making changes as soon as they come! Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:44, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• The photo caption says "David and Patrick", but in the photo itself, Patrick is on the left. Either switching the names or indicating (left) and (right) would help.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:13, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

• The one-hour documentary is mentioned in the lede but nowhere in the body.

 Fixed Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:13, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Synopsis

• The synopsis is short, but the plot of this episode is fairly thin. The only thing I would add is that the original officiant cancels, and Moira has to fill in.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:15, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

• that Deadline Hollywood reference doesn't seem to match up with what the sentence says. The WP article says that the series started airing on Pop TV with its fifth season, while DH mentions seasons 4 and 3

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:20, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

• remove comma after "sixth"

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:20, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

• Pipe Hockley Valley to Mono, Ontario, which encompasses Hockley

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:20, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Italicize IndieWire

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:22, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Ref [23], IndieWire, should be marked as "work" and not "publisher", as the publisher would be the Penske Media Corporation.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:22, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

• Refs [11] and [17], both Vulture, should be marked with "|url-access=limited", because /shakes fist at paywall

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:22, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

General

• Article edit history is stable.
• Earwig copyvio score came back high, but the offender is clearly a mirror site, so I am unbothered.
• One free use image at the top, appropriately labeled, and an appropriate CC image in the body.

Final comments

A quick, pleasant read! Biggest two things are really the fact that the documentary is not mentioned in the body, and that one Deadline Hollywood reference. I'll put the article  On hold until everything has been addressed! Kncny11 ^(shoot) 18:12, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

@Kncny11: All done. Thanks for the review. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:22, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Looks good! Thanks for getting those fixes in so quickly, and I'll pass it now. Kncny11 ^(shoot) 18:29, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

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