Talk:Hans Albers

Latest comment: 7 years ago by ScienceGuard in topic Getting the references sorted out

References missing

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References vs. Bibliography

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The article misses references. I started integrating references based on the German article. The article includes a general "Bibliography" section, however these "References" are not pointing to any specific section in the article. I suggest to merge it with the references section and to set it into context with the text.

Structure

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I also improved the structure of the article, dividing it into subsections.

ScienceGuard (talk) 18:18, 6 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Getting the references sorted out

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In order to verify and substantiate the statements I bought the book "Hans Albers" by Matthias Wegner, which I added to the references and double-checked the statements. I only had to delete one emotional non-referenced statement. To my understanding the "Legacy" section needs some more references and the language needs to be edited. To me it sounds like translated from German.

ScienceGuard (talk) 18:41, 24 January 2017 (UTC)Reply