Talk:Hamilton Fish Park/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Short description goes at the top.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• "restored again" → "restored"
• "facades made" → "facades are made"
• Remove the comma after "pool entrances".
• "mayor Robert" → "Mayor Robert"
• "bee reopened" - typo?
• "a NYC Parks" → "an NYC Parks"
• "wading pool; and" → "wading pool, and"
• "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
• "New York City, it was" → "New York City, was"
• Wikilink Edith Evans Asbury and Amy Sohn.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 04:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)