Talk:Hallucinate (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Ultimate Boss in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 06:07, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply


I will review this soon.The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:07, 1 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. Well written:
    1. the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct;  
    2. it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.  
  2. Verifiable with no original research:
    1. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;  
    2. all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines;  
  • I have heard Celebmix is unreliable. If I'm wrong, please let me know.
  • I don't think it has ever been classified as unreliable, it's just been challenged as so. I'll remove it just in case. LOVI33 23:16, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Wikilink Billboard to Billboard for ref 1.
  • Remove wikilink for Billboard on ref 13 and ref 37.
  • MOS:CAPS for ref 64.
  • Is ref 83 reliable?
  • I don't see why not. LOVI33 23:16, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • MOS:CAPS for ref 88.
  • Wikilink NME on ref 86 and remove the wikilink for NME on ref 110.
  • MOS:CAPS for ref 88.
  • Remove wikilink for The Face on ref 108.

  Done

    1. it contains no original research; and  
    2. it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism.  
  1. Broad in its coverage:
    1. it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and 
  • with the latter of the three" → "with all three"
  •   Not done, referring to last person mentioned, not all of them. LOVI33 23:16, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "It runs for 3 minutes and 28 seconds," → It runs for a total of 3 minutes and 28 seconds,"
  • italisice Insider
  • italisice Complex

  Done

    1. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). 
  1. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. 
  2. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. 
  3. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
    1. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content; and 
    2. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. 
  4. Overall
    1.  
The Ultimate Boss, thanks for the review! I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if there's anything else I need to do. LOVI33 23:16, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
LOVI33 I will pass this! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 07:15, 15 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
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