Talk:Halki Theological School Gardens
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Review by Xueqing Hu
editThis garden is very interesting, and thanks for your contribution!
There is a small error: in the part of The Trail of Virtues, a link has been added to the Codex Oxoniensis Clarkianus 39， but the link does not exist. Xueqing Hu (talk) 12:36, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Inquiry_Shuangning Li
editI think that "The Trail of Virtues" need to change in "The trail of virtues". Maybe it is better, do you think so? Shuangning Li (talk) 12:37, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Review by Abduselam Hamid
editthanks for the article I just made some corrections like making titles with small letters.
Suggestion
editThe title of the final section "Thematic design approach as byzantine and orthodox christianity monastic garden tradition through the Ages" is very long, perhaps consider shortening it to "Thematic design through the ages", "Design History" or "Evolution" -- Tmerbex92 (talk) 14:30, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Observations and suggestions for improvements
editThe following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.
Careful revision of the text for syntactic correctness and lexical choices is recommended
-- BarettoDiArchitettura (talk) 08:51, 4 September 2022 (UTC)