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editThese two cruisers supposedly had the two largest bronze castings up to that date incorporated in the bow and stern.AT Kunene (talk) 14:53, 31 October 2011 (UTC)
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editDeck of the ship and the crew:
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:25, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
- Will review this article. Courcelles (talk) 20:25, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
- Is the dab link in "high standard in gunnery" intentional?
- The first bullet point is as close as I can get to a proper link.
- "the relief force of that reached the foreign quarter of Tientsin on 24 June." The 'of that' here reads awkwardly.
- Is there a link or explanation somewhere for what a prize firing is?
- Not that I can find. It's basically an annual gunnery shoot that every ship is required to do. When I was in the Army it was our annual qualification on our weapons.
- In the image caption 'A 12-pounder gun on one of Scott's carriages in Natal, South Africa" Natal is a dab link.
- Fixed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:29, 18 August 2018 (UTC)
- Good work. Courcelles (talk) 10:23, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
- Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 21:58, 18 August 2018 (UTC)