Talk:HMS Russell (1901)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 09:52, 26 December 2018 (UTC)

• I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:52, 26 December 2018 (UTC)
• No DABs, external links OK
• Images appropriately licensed.
• sighting equipment and training and elevation gear Awkward, maybe use traversing in there somewhere?
  • Works for me
    • Sorry, wasn't entirely clear. I meant the three "and"s--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:59, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
      • How about flipping the order? Parsecboy (talk) 21:10, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
• 126 yards (115 m) Depths are measured in fathoms (rarely) or feet (most commonly), not yards.
  • Fixed
• Delimara peninsula Capitalize the P
  • Fixed
• Your note should refer to the author's names like all of your cites.
  • Done
• Have you seen Goldrick's updated version of The King's Ships? It been seriously updated and now has the title of Before Jutland. I thought it was a worthwhile upgrade.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:15, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
  • No, I hadn't seen that - I'll have to get a copy if I ever take these ships past GA. Parsecboy (talk) 20:40, 28 December 2018 (UTC)