HMS Retriever (1917) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: December 23, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:11, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
I'll get to this soon. ♦ jaguar 15:11, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
- The lead summarises the article in accordance to WP:LEAD
- "The ships differed from the six preceding Thornycroft M-class built by the yard" - where was the yard in question? Southampton? Don't worry about specifying if it isn't possible
- "along with four 21 in (533 mm)" - inch
- "The following year, the ship was credited with the destruction of the submarine SM UB-54" - perhaps de-link submarine here
In light of its length and well-written prose I'll promote this outright. It meets the GA criteria both on prose and comprehensibility, owing to its short service history. I couldn't find any other issues with the article and enjoyed reading it. The above points are very minor nitpicks, but otherwise this is definitely GA standard. Well done - I'll be on the lookout to reviewing more Royal Navy GANs. ♦ jaguar 14:01, 23 December 2020 (UTC)