Talk:HMS Magpie (1826)/GA1

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:29, 6 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:29, 6 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Image appropriately licensed
  • Suggest rephrasing the lede to state that she was the lead or name ship of her class.
  • Done.
  • Suggest that you tell the reader that the guns were smoothbores in the infobox and main body
  • Added the link as at Beaulieu
  • Replace the link to long gun with the link for naval long gun
  • Done.

@Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for this and your other reviews. See if my actions are satisfactory. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 19:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)Reply