Talk:HMS Hope (1910)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 14:30, 21 June 2022 (UTC)
- Number of ships in the Acorn class only appears in the lead
- Added with reference.
- "using oil enabled the design of a smaller vessel which increased weaponry" - this could use some elucidation, as a smaller vessel would not seem to be one that could have more weapons
- Good spot. I have clarified it.
- "The greater deck space was used to mount a larger armament." - I thought the class was designed to be smaller?
- It is both smaller and better armed. I hope that is clearer now.
- "but was paid off in 1919" - is there a link for "paid off"?
- It does not link to a page, and I do not feel it is helpful. Maybe its a chance for a page to be written...
- Something is off with the licensing for File:Hope-1911.jpg - the author information says the author died in 1911 but the tag says the author died in 1920
- True. There are a number of photos by the author, some with 1911 and others with 1920, so I feel it is unclear. I have replaced the image with one which has a CC license.
- Spot-checked a couple of the sources; no issues.
Hog Farm Talk 00:27, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: Thank you for the review. I believe everything has been addressed. simongraham (talk) 23:23, 24 June 2022 (UTC)