Talk:HMS Exmouth (H02)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:09, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. Speed 36.75 knot in the info box but only 36 knot in the text
2. anti-aircraft guns differ from text to info box I suspect the text is the correct link as the box goes to Vickers Machine Gun
3. Torpedoes in the text is 21-inch (533 mm) and only 530mm in the inf box

• All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:13, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

On hold

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on. Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:09, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

• Now passed Jim Sweeney (talk) 01:32, 21 April 2011 (UTC)