Talk:HMS Crusader (H60)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 06:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

• Where's the caption for the first pic?
  • Added.
• "the ship spent"
  • Good catch.
• Please add   to dates
  • Not required by MOS, otherwise somebody at FAC would have complained about their lac,.
• What's the "1929 Programme"?
  • Clarified.
• "sailed to Greenock, Scotland, and" note the comma
  • Agreed.
• "while 69 survivors were rescued by nearby vessels." passive voice.
  • Fixed.
• Checklinks reviews 3 damaged links.
  • The links are good, you just need to select which convoy you want to look at.
• Add alt text to images (strongly recommended).

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:31, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Is there anything left to do here?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:50, 26 October 2011 (UTC)