Talk:HMS Brazen (H80)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 21:12, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Dabs and external links are good (no action required)
  • In "description" it might be worthy to note how the ship design deviated from the typical B-class destroyer as a frame of reference. Even if it was an exact specification of the class, just say so.
    • Why? This is unnecessary as I've presented her info as provided by my sources. If she varied significantly, I'd have mentioned it.
  • "The ship was ordered on 22 March 1929 from Palmers Shipbuilding and Iron Company at Hebburn under the 1928 Naval Programme" - is there a link to this program? If not, add a sentence or two explaining what it was (I assume it was a naval expansion plan)
    • Linked, it was the annual shipbuilding authorization.
  • "The ship received a refit at Devonport from August to October 1933 and another at Malta a few months later." - any idea the nature of these refits?
    • Nope, just the standard sort of things.
  • Also, any idea of the number of convoys the ship escorted in the war?
    • No, that sort of detailed data isn't available for the coastal convoys.
Will check back soon. —Ed!(talk) 21:18, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:25, 10 December 2011 (UTC)Reply