Talk:HMS B9/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:43, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
A few minor things:
- suggest lk=on for the first displacement conversion
- suggest lk=on for the first power conversion and in the infobox
- link Dardanelles
- Linked in the lede
- the campaign is linked in the lead, I think it would be useful to link the waterway article to help readers. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:46, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
- Linked in the lede
- link Venice
- B9 made
theirits first patrol- No, she made the first patrol of all the British subs there
- Ah. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:59, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
- "difficulty her proper depth" maintaining?
- You recognized the implied word there!
That's it. Placing on hold for the above points to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:31, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, PM--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:59, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:59, 27 September 2019 (UTC)