Talk:HMCS Integrity (1804)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:54, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:54, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

• No DABs and external links good.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Link dockyard, brig, Chile, launched, Lieutenant, Lieutenant-Colonel, convict, gaol, gale, Cape Howe, Kent Group.
  • Done - except changed gaol to prison as perhaps a more universally understood word (and where "gaol" redirects to on en-WP).
• Was Houstoun a Royal Navy officer or a colonial one?
  • Royal Navy - have clarified in the text.
• While in port one put a comma between port and one.
  • Done.
• Houstoun was promoted to Lieutenant aboard Buffalo I know that you mean that Houstoun was transferred to Buffalo, but you might want to reword it to make it clearer to readers unfamiliar with the RN's promotion practices of the time.
  • Reworded to "Houstoun's achievement in navigating the storm was recognised through a transfer to Buffalo, a larger and more prestigious vessel than Integrity." Hope that works better - it was easier than trying to explain why a position as Lieutenant aboard a colonial cutter was far inferior to Lieutenant aboard a genuine RN ship. But let me know if you'd like me to try this a different way.
• Be consistent about putting your book titles in title case.
  • Done
• Duplicate link for Bass Strait.
  • Fixed.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for the review, please let me know if you spot other things that need fixing up. -- Euryalus (talk) 12:50, 14 March 2016 (UTC)