Talk:Hương Ngô

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Netherzone in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Feedback from New Page Review process edit

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Hi, thank you for creating the article. I've made some improvements to the draft, and have accepted it after review. There are some issues that still need to be resolved. Every claim in the article should have a citation to an independent reliable source. Also I cleaned up some original research and jargon in the draft - the article MUST reflect what the independent sources say, not what editors may synthesize or interpret. I got thru the first part of the article, and it would be great if you could go through the remainder and check to make sure that there is no WP:OR original research or WP:SYNTH synthesis. Thanks again for creating this article on an interesting woman artist!

Netherzone (talk) 22:27, 2 March 2023 (UTC)Reply