Talk:Guy Pallavicini

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cplakidas in topic Prose Suggestions

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Guy Pallavicini/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:07, 20 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:07, 20 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria edit

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (Highest value is 10.7%, due only to similarities of reference name in article and same name appearing in source.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y

Prose Suggestions edit

  • Frankish Greece from 1204 to his May wish to add that the Greek called this period Frankokratia, could be done with parentheses.
    • Hmmm, sort of extraneous here. It is linked either way through "Frankish Greece". Constantine 10:47, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • whose part-owner Guy was suggest which was partially owned by Guy.
  • leaving his underage son Demetrius suggest infant rather than underage, since his article seems to indicate he was only two years old at the time, and "underaged" could, in the mind of a layman, mean up to 20 years old.
  • @Cplakidas: That is all my comments. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:50, 25 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
Hi Iazyges! I've fixed the points above, and gone through once more for minor issues. On the arms, I am hesitant to use 18th/19th-century arms for a 13th-century person, without knowing when and to which branch of the family they were conferred; I know that there is a tendency to include such in many similar articles, but that is incorrect practice. Cheers, Constantine 10:47, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Reply