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Neutrality

This article reads very positively, almost like an obituary - perhaps little surprise, when much of its sourcing comes from exactly that. Some particular sentences stick out:

• turning St Faith's Mission into a famous pioneering non-racial community
• He joined in founding the Southern Rhodesia African National Congress in 1957, and was largely responsible for its non-racial and Black/White partnership policies (uncited)
• which became a widely acclaimed pattern for racial freedom and regeneration in the poverty-stricken countries of Africa: cited but gushing, and I'm not sure "the poverty-stricken countries of Africa" is quite encyclopaedic.

However, there's clearly a concern here as to what's not included as much as to what is. UndercoverClassicist (talk) 15:21, 31 May 2023 (UTC)