Hello Lullabying, I'll be the one to take up this nomination's review, which I will present shortly. I hope my feedback will be helpful and I get to learn something new in the process. Tayi ArajakateTalk 22:50, 2 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Lullabying, I've completed the review. Great work on the article but some polishing is needed. See the assessment table and comments below for specifics. Feel free to ask me if you have any questions or concerns. Tayi ArajakateTalk 03:42, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
The article needs copyediting. There are a lot minor mistakes here and there. For example; the first line in the lead might need a "," before "that", the second line in the lead is missing a "was", the caption in the infobox should say "2018" instead of "2011", the fourth line of the second paragraph of history doesn't need "while" and "in beginning", ref 8 says its from Variety but it's instead from The New York Times, the second last line of history should say "u" instead of "o", etc etc. These are just in the lead and the first section, there are more like these afterwards. The section under content uses present tense in some lines, which should be in the past tense. "satisfaction in marriage" needs an ending quotation mark.
Done Ref 9 is fixed; "o" to "u" is fixed. lullabying (talk) 06:30, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
"Satisfaction in marriage" is fixed as well. lullabying (talk) 06:32, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
I changed the caption in the infobox to "since 2011" instead. lullabying (talk) 06:35, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
"Was" is added to the second line in the lead. lullabying (talk) 06:38, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
No comma before "that" in the first line of the lead is grammatically correct. Can you suggest another way to reword? lullabying (talk) 06:46, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Lullabying, how about replacing "was online" with "operated" then? Anyways, this one doesn't matter much I just think it can look a bit odd at first glance. Tayi ArajakateTalk 07:32, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Some writing has been changed to past tense. Thanks! lullabying (talk) 06:53, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
I removed "in beginning"; it was supposed to read "beginning in." lullabying (talk) 20:23, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
The fourth line of the second paragraph says that the site was non-commercial. This isn't what the citation says. Non-commercial includes more than not having merchandise, it implies it was ad free as well which isn't clear here.
Done I added a source for it. Ref 5 (Community in the Digital Age: Philosophy and Practice) mentions Gurl.com was an example of a decline in non-commercial media aimed at children and discussed its ethics in its inclusion of advertising. lullabying (talk) 20:30, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Ref 9 is a primary source, it should be replaced with a secondary source if possible.
Do you mean ref 19? Unfortunately I could not find a secondary source for it, given that this was 10 years ago and news media sometimes don't report on website changes. lullabying (talk) 06:36, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Yes, that's what I meant and that's alright. Tayi ArajakateTalk 07:18, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
I think "most media outlets" should be changed to either commentators or reviewers.
Done I changed to "reviewers." lullabying (talk) 06:42, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
The first line describing the first logo could be moved in the body of the article.
It's already in the body of the article, at the end of the first paragraph. lullabying (talk) 06:35, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Sorry I meant the second line, which describes the logo. It makes the caption appear as large as the image itself. Tayi ArajakateTalk 07:17, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Lullabying, I've read through the article for a second time and I'm going to promote this artice now since most of the issues have been resolved. There's one minor issue though which i would request you to correct, the second line under content should be in the past tense and the first two lines under legacy should be in present tense. Tayi ArajakateTalk 23:59, 3 July 2021 (UTC)Reply