Talk:Gun Carrier Mark I

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Keith-264 in topic Awkward sentence

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@Duncan: Is it wise to alter the url and leave the Ethos id intact? Regards Keith-264 (talk) 15:29, 20 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Awkward sentence

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Nice article. However, please look at the first sentence under Gun Carrier Mark I sub-section. It is not clear. (Why did they start in March, if they did not get GHQ approval until May? Lloyd George's action sounds like it was not connected with the approval process. Should there be two sentences?) Djmaschek (talk) 04:40, 23 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, OK now? Keith-264 (talk) 08:51, 23 February 2019 (UTC)Reply