Talk:Guinness Foreign Extra Stout

GA Review

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Reviewer: SilkTork (talk · contribs) 18:59, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

I'll start reading over the next few days and then begin to make comments. I am normally a slow reviewer - if that is likely to be a problem, please let me know now. I tend to directly do copy-editing and minor improvements, though if there is a lot of work needed I may suggest getting a copy-editor. Anything more significant than minor improvements I will raise here. I see the reviewer's role as collaborative and collegiate, so I welcome discussion regarding interpretation of the criteria. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 18:59, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Listing as a Good Article. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 09:21, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is clear and concise, without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Comments on GA criteria

Pass

• Images OK. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 19:32, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
• Has a reference section. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 19:34, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
• Stable. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 19:34, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
• Prose is clear and readable. SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 19:35, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Query

Fail

Pass

This is a well researched and well organised article complying with GA criteria. Only minor attention needed to copyediting, layout and the lead (WP:Lead gives good advice regarding the lead section. As a rough rule, check that there is some form of summary of the main points of each section). This was a fairly easy article to review. Well done! SilkTork ^{✔Tea time} 09:21, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

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Higher ABV more bitterness = incorrect

...is incorrect. More hops gives more bitterness. Higher ABV does not increase bitterness.

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