Talk:Guilty Gear X/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 08:50, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
I'll have this done soon ☠ Jaguar ☠ 08:50, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments edit
- "It was released in July 2000 for Japanese arcades, and re-released in different versions for different platforms: Dreamcast, Microsoft Windows, PlayStation 2 and Game Boy Advance" - doesn't say when the release of the console versions were (something of a norm for VG articles)
- Done. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- "criticized for their replay value" - replay value sounds like a good thing? It might sound clearer as lack of replay value
- Haha, missed this one. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- "The Advance Edition includes tag-team" - is the game actually called The Advance Edition or is it referring to just the GBA version? I thought it must be capitalised for a reason
- Yeah, it's called "Advance Edition". Later on, "Development and release" it's clarified, isn't it? Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- "Guilty Gear was successful after its initial May 14, 1998 release " - I would link the first game here as it caused me confusion to which game it was referring to
- Reworded but didn't link it here because it's linked on the plot. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- "it was about two years in development" - which game was in two years development? The first one or this one?
- Clarified. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- Have you got any sales figures for the PlayStation version to be mentioned in the Reception section?
- Guilty Gear X Plus is the PlayStation version. It's there. I couldn't find anything on the GBA version, though... Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
On hold edit
This is an excellent article, I'll wait for those minor issues to be clarified but after that this should be good to go ☠ Jaguar ☠ 11:16, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I've done an edit. Can you take a look, Jaguar? Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:58, 7 April 2015 (UTC)