 | A fact from Growth fault appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 November 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
|  |
 | This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||
| |||||||||||||||||||||
Your page was extremely informative and had nice figures. I only have a few suggestions:
- My biggest suggestion is that you have someone proofread your page; you have grammatical errors throughout.
- There are a number of run-on sentences that need to be broken up into separate sentences, or they would greatly benefit from the use of commas.
- Can you include a link to the "rift-drift stage" in the Driving force section?
Melissausburn (talk) 01:16, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
Emad
- I love your original figures, very nice detail.
- I saw a few things that might help you out, aside from the grammatical mistakes:
- Add more linked words. This page is very informative and most readers might need to educate themselves further to understand it.
- You reference Figure 1 in the intro, but don't have FIG.1 in the text.
- More images would help break up the density of the material of the page.
- List actual locations were they are found.
- In the driving force section, you mention "viscous", this is such a key word in plate tectonics in general, I think you should have a link or an explanation in the text.
- Dynamics section needs to be moved up at least one section, if not right under the introduction. This would give a better flow to the page.
- Last section "importance" may-be say why oil and gas seek out that grain size and layer thickness.