Talk:Growth fault

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Sara8s001

Your page was extremely informative and had nice figures. I only have a few suggestions:

  • My biggest suggestion is that you have someone proofread your page; you have grammatical errors throughout.
  • There are a number of run-on sentences that need to be broken up into separate sentences, or they would greatly benefit from the use of commas.
  • Can you include a link to the "rift-drift stage" in the Driving force section?

Melissausburn (talk) 01:16, 19 November 2013 (UTC)Reply


Emad

  • I love your original figures, very nice detail.
  • I saw a few things that might help you out, aside from the grammatical mistakes:
  • Add more linked words. This page is very informative and most readers might need to educate themselves further to understand it.
  • You reference Figure 1 in the intro, but don't have FIG.1 in the text.
  • More images would help break up the density of the material of the page.
  • List actual locations were they are found.
  • In the driving force section, you mention "viscous", this is such a key word in plate tectonics in general, I think you should have a link or an explanation in the text.
  • Dynamics section needs to be moved up at least one section, if not right under the introduction. This would give a better flow to the page.
  • Last section "importance" may-be say why oil and gas seek out that grain size and layer thickness.

Sara8s001 (talk) 02:15, 19 November 2013 (UTC)Reply