Talk:Graveyard Mountain Home/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by UnaLaguna in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:58, 21 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

  • Unfortunately, the Transcending the Mundane interview and review have been offline since early September and look unlikely to come back online. I can't find any archived versions of the pages at archive.org, so I'll have to go through and delete everything which relies on those sources. Una LagunaTalk 15:14, 21 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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Background

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Composition

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  • This section doesn't really cover the composition of the album, it is more of an extension to the background section. Focus on musical genres and styles and lyrics
  • "plan to record an "organic, and less digital"[1] album," - place ref after comma
Paragraph removed - source offline. Una LagunaTalk 15:14, 21 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Release and promotion

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  • Good work here

Reception

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Track listing

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  • Source for writers?
  • Isn't it common sense where the sources for writers, personnel, and the track listing itself are from? I've done a few album GAs now and this hasn't been an issue, but I can add the if you like.
  • You can incorporate the additional writers of songs into the extra_column field in {{track listing}}

Personnel

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  • Source?

References

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  • Make sure that only works in print are italicised, (ie websites should not be)
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I'll place the review on hold until improvements are made. Adabow (talk · contribs) 01:28, 21 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Nice work - passed now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:55, 30 November 2010 (UTC)Reply
Many thanks for your thorough review! :) Una LagunaTalk 23:06, 30 November 2010 (UTC)Reply