Talk:Grand Army of the Republic Hall (Litchfield, Minnesota)

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Clariosophic in topic First person

First person edit

I don't know who put the "first person" tag on the article, but it does indeed need cleanup. It should properly cite "Terry Tales" instead of being a direct quote from the book, although I believe Terry Shaw (the author of "Terry Tales") entered all the text himself. Can this be properly GFDL-ed? --Elkman - (Elkspeak) 15:49, 28 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

I've just done a rough cleanup to get rid of the first and second person language and to divide it into sections. I deleted some unsourced bragging type statements, I've deleted the tag. It still needs cleanup work in other areas. clariosophic (talk) 00:19, 15 December 2007 (UTC)Reply