Talk:Grace, Replaced/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:32, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall this is a good article, I just have a couple things to fix:

  • "NBC decided to move the program to Tuesdays at 9:30 p.m., that resulted in viewers tuning in." a little confusing; reword, or modify the punctuation at least.
    • I think I got it.
  • "A television reviewer from the Times Union recommended the episode" Is there more on that? It just sounds rather cryptic in comparison to all the other receptions.
    • Removed.

Just those couple things. I'll put the article on hold and pass when they're fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:32, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:46, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
No problem. Looks good now, so the article passes as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 21:36, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
Thank you very much, Mr. Wizard. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:43, 9 April 2010 (UTC)Reply