Talk:Gonen Ben Itzhak

Latest comment: 3 years ago by 2603:7000:2143:8500:5577:5569:E991:487A in topic The Green Prince

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk19:32, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Created/expanded by Omert33 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:56, 26 November 2020 (UTC).Reply

  •   The Biography section, the first half of the Shin Bet position section, the second sentence in the Social activism section, and the Personal life section needs to be referenced. I see that "a former Shin Bet coordinator" for ALT2 is in the lead, but it needs to appear in the body of the articles and needs to have a direct citation right after the sentence. The same goes for "one of the leading figures in the protests against Benjamin Netanyahu". For ALT2, "Ben Itzhak is among the founding members of "Hoze Hadash" (New Contract) movement, better known as "Crime Minister" also needs a direct citation at the end of the sentence. For ALT3, where is the word "prominent" coming from? Other than that, I assume good faith on the Hebrew references and a QPQ is not needed. SL93 (talk) 04:04, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • @Omert33: Some issues still need to be fixed. I think it might be easier in a list.
  • The Biography section has no citations.
  • The sentence is "Ben Itzhak is a member of "Israel Yekara Lanu" (Israel is Dear to Us) fighting against the cost of living in Israel." under Social activism is unreferenced.
  • "a former Shin Bet coordinator" still needs to also appear in the body of the article with a citation.
  • "one of the leading figures in the protests against Benjamin Netanyahu" still needs to also appear in the body of the article with a citation. SL93 (talk) 15:43, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • I see that you added the citations to the lead which is fine to me. I'm just updating what needs to be fixed for my benefit. - "Biography section needs to be referenced". SL93 (talk) 16:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  •   Hi, I came by to promote this, and did some editing to remove repetitive text. Please explain in a few words what "The Gas Plan" is. Much of what you're writing about his social activism is not explained well and will be unintelligible to non-Israeli readers. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

The Green Prince

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I think the Green Prince link should go to his page. It was in fact his nickname. Not to the movie about him, bearing that name. User:Yoninah User:SL93 --2603:7000:2143:8500:5577:5569:E991:487A (talk) 06:14, 31 December 2020 (UTC)Reply