Talk:Going, Going, Gone (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 05:06, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "people" should be viewers
- Lede: "18–49 demographic" could that be explained for the lede. See "Nightswimming" for an example.
- Production: Add alt to the images
- Production: Twitter not a good source, replace or remove the statement
- Production: "43 minutes". Well, about it actually.
- Production: "Private Practice" explain what it is more
- Reception: "people" should be viewers
- Reception: "18–49 demographic" could that be explained for reception also. See "Nightswimming" for an example.
- Reception: "killed" to "murdered"