Talk:Go Ahead and Break My Heart/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
GAN review coming soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- from the → for the
- as the second → as its second
- as a digital download → for digital download
- collaboration together → remove "together"
- was handled → was solely handled
- The concept for the song began after the pair shared similar insecurities with each other, leaving Shelton to write the first verse, followed by Stefani analyzing it and writing her own. → A concept can't began; reword it to sound like there were some sessions or such
- who found → with them founding it
- "with them founding it" is grammatically incorrect so I stated "with them finding it" instead
- also appreciated → remove "also"
- on the United States' → remove "the"
- The release → The recording's release
- day, on → remove comma
Background and composition
edit- The duet → The release of the duet
- notes to → notes of
- expressed the → expressed that the
- Shelton also expressed → He further explained
- second. Shelton described → second, which Shelton described as:
- Try to alternate word using for "duet"
- It is a → It portrays a
- "don't gush about their relationship in the press too much, as they try to keep some semblance of privacy. Instead, they wrote a song about it." → "[didn't] gush about their relationship in the press too much, as they [tried] to keep some semblance of privacy. Instead, they wrote a song about it."
- Stefani sings about her → The lyrics of the recording delve on Stefani's
- the two met → the two artists met
Critical reception
edit- well received → well-received
- hitsville" and thanking → hitsville", with her thanking
- also thought → remove "also"
- stating Stefani → stating that Stefani
- remove "and concluded by"
- selected the track → selected the recording
- stating "as → stating that
Chart performance
edit- debut, behind → remove comma
- The song has sold → The track has sold (you repeat "song" twice)
- in the US → in America
Live performances
edit- sang it again → sang it additionally
Outcome
editI've put this article On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:29, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Thanks. I believe I completed everything. Carbrera (talk) 20:12, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Gladly passing. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:42, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.