Talk:Glenn Close/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• "most nominated" → "most-nominated"

Early life and family

• This section looks good.

Career

Theatre

• Remove the comma after "began performing in 1974".
• Add serial commas after the second use of "violin", Martin Short, and "Julia".
• Avoid the repetitive use of the "In [year], [event]" formula in several sections.
• Add a comma after "During the production".
• Remove the comma after "Best Musical Performance".
• Comma after "February 9, 2017" per WP:DATECOMMA.
• Comma after the first use of The Guardian.
• Avoid single-sentence paragraphs.

Film

• Several paragraphs are missing sources.
• Fix the "citation needed" issues.
• Remove the comma after "attached to the role".
• Remove the comma after "for this performance".
• "stellar reviews" needs more verification with additional sources.
• Several paragraphs also lack sources here.
• Commas after sentences starting with "In the film".

Television

• Paragraphs. Need. Sources.
• "highly rated" → "highly-rated"
• The phrase "highly-rated" also needs a source.
• "that network" → "that the network"
• Comma after "in addition".
• "open to do" doesn't sound encyclopedic.
• "half hour" → "half-hour"

Reception, acting style, and legacy

• Comma after Bridget Fonda.
• Other than that, this section looks good.

Personal life

• Remove the comma after the second use of "Bozeman".
• Add a comma after Angus King.

Activism

• "which performed" → "that performed"

Acting credits and awards

• Expand this section with some mentions of awards and selected filmography.

References

• Properly cite sources.
• Several citations are missing authors/websites/dates.
• Avoid using ALL-CAPS per WP:ALLCAPS and WP:SHOUT.
• Also avoid having ".com" in the website parameters.
• Page Six is not reliable per WP:NYPOST.
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

• @Film Enthusiast: You there? I'll give this nom another week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Hi there, yes my bad. I got caught up with the other article that I forgot to work on this one. Hopefully I'll be able to make enough progress during the timeframe. Thanks for the extension. Film Enthusiast (talk) 18:24, 11 May 2021 (UTC)