Talk:Glastonbury Canal/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Rodw in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:31, 8 November 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll finish this one soon. JAGUAR  22:31, 8 November 2015 (UTC)Reply


Disambiguations: none found

Linkrot: none found.

Checking against GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "The Glastonbury Canal ran for just over 14 miles (23 km)" - I think "just" sounds a bit informal for the opening sentence
    " In the 1750s, the town became a spa town" - link spa town
    "At the Highbridge end, the plans for a floating harbour to accommodate vessels of up to 250 long tons (250 t) were dropped" - tonnes (British English)
    " and a cavalcade from Highbridge to Glastonbury and back" - 'and back' sounds informal and vague here
    "They were declared bankrupt and Richard was removed from office as town clerk" - who's Richard?
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    References check out OK, reliable sources, no evidence of OR
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Neutral
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    Stable, no edit warring
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    No images used
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

I couldn't find anything worthy enough for this to be put on hold, so I'll pass it now. It's a well written article that meets the GA criteria, well done!   JAGUAR  11:31, 9 November 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thanks. I have dealt with most of the queries above, except tons v tonnes as this is always difficult as it may be long ton as it depends on the source and time period.— Rod talk 11:40, 9 November 2015 (UTC)Reply