Talk:Give Me All Your Luvin'/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 20:37, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply


  • Use "Give Me All Your Luvin{[' "}} so that the apostrophe and quotation mark doesn't look like
  • Madonna had ample time for the album, → Reads a bit fan written
  • strong women with a unique voice, → strong women with unique voices,
  • what they represented. → Such as?
  • Madonna executes the → Madonna performs the
  • singer Nicola Roberts' "Beat of My Drum", especially the cheerleader like verses. → Some context is needed, presumably that Diplo produced Robert's song?
  • her record as the artist with the most number one singles in that chart. → Link this to Artists with the most number-ones on the U.S. dance chart
  • During the performance the latter → During the performance, M.I.A.
  • extended her middle finger → Link this
  • performed "Give Me All Your Luvin" wearing → Missing apostrophe after Luvin
  • been summoned to New York City → 'summoned' reads a bit Godly on Madonna's part
  • reported about similarities → reported on the similarities
  • The image in Critical reception is making the block quote look like a normal para. Use the coding for the block quote in the Music video section of "Man Down (song)" so that it forces the block quote to stay indented.
  • Madonna also extended her record as the artist with the most number-one songs on the Hot Dance Club Songs chart, → Link to what I suggested above again.
  • It's called Dance Club Songs now. Hot is omitted and has been for a few years.
  • In another review Nicole James → Remove 'in another review'
  • Media blamed M.I.A. → For what?
  • Ref 22 and 44 have double quotation marks in their titles. Use ' for titles to avoid this.
  • Switch the linking of Hollywood Reporter from 98 to 20
  • Ref 86 link Spin
Outcome

On hold.  — Calvin999 20:54, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Done all. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 14:48, 28 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Passing :)  — Calvin999 15:16, 28 August 2015 (UTC)Reply