Talk:Gibraltar at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:08, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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A good article, and should be a GA with some tweaking

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

• MoS suggests not to have bold wikilinks.

Done

• competed at the >> competed in the

What's wrong with this? It's grammatically correct.

• "which is responsible for the Commonwealth Games and Commonwealth Youth Games in Gibraltar." - This can be rather moved to the background section.

It's already there. Lead is supposed to be a summary of whole article.

• "The Association selected ... different sports." Needs copy-editing. I would prefer "The Association selected a delegation of five male competitors, who participated in eleven events of three different sports."

Done

• "semifinal of 200 m" - 200 m what???

Done

• where he >> in which he

Done

• athletics competitor - competitors should be plural

Done

• Tell that Frank Warwick is a cyclist

Done

• It seems that Sanderson participated in five events, and not six

Done

• Link British Columbia

Done

• 23.25 seconds, 23.25 minutes, 23.25 hours, or 23.25 days? :P

Done

• Link the sports to Athletics at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games, Cycling at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games and Swimming at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games

That will be overlinking as there are already corresponding "See also" in each section.

• The pictograms in the section headings should come first before the sport name

Done

• Add the key for Q

Done

• Link the athletes at least once.

Athletes are non-notable as per Wikipedia standards of notability. No point of linking their names with a red-link.

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

• "The country has ... since then." is unsourced

Done

1. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

3. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

4. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

5. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Good luck!!! ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 16:35, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Vibhi. — Bill william compton^Talk 17:09, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

Article passed. Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 09:09, 9 November 2012 (UTC)