Talk:German torpedo boat T33/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:26, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:
- in the lead, suggest "until 1954 when the ship was converted into an accommodation ship
in 1954" - perhaps link counterattack
- move the link to East Prussia up to first mention?
- rm the italics from towed
- "and returned to help transport"
- Primerny should probably be bolded in the lead
That's it. placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:36, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- I do like contests that help be clear out my backlog of B-class articles. Much appreciate the reviews.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:00, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, I was working my way through the task force assessment backlogs and saw a brace of yours in the German one. Should pump up your stats for the monthly contest... This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:14, 5 September 2019 (UTC)