Talk:German torpedo boat T32/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:58, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
This article is in very good shape. I have a few minor comments:
- suggest linking convoy in the lead
- if there were three quad mounts of the 20 mm AA guns, and a dozen in total, what about the single ones in the infobox?
- you could drop the .0 on the TT conversion in the body
- consider "The flotilla, consisting T32 as the flotilla leader, and her sisters..."
- suggest new sentence beginning "T32 was sunk by Soviet aircraft after dawn..."
- suggest "after her departure"→"after T23's departure"
That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:43, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, PM--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:44, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
- No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:40, 4 September 2019 (UTC)